GASP

nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson)

Deep in shadow
By the doorway
That leads to
Another time
The ghost that
Watches forlornly
In its stillness
Eyes to shine.

Back within
Its very soul
A pained 
Furrowed brow
Dressed with death
An awkward step
That whispers
Softly now.

Half spoken words
In phantom breeze
Its staggered walk
Its hunching lean
Slowly closer
Within my grasp
I do no more
Than release a gasp.

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  • orchidee

    Good write N. And gasp - what you said when a bus arrived?! lol.

  • sorenbarrett

    A dark and haunting poem of startled reaction to the unexpected. Well done

  • Friendship

    Well written . The ghost could represent unresolved emotions, perhaps related to grief or nostalgia.

  • Tristan Robert Lange

    Norman, this drew me right in, my friend. It has that wonderful ghost-story atmosphere where the tension builds slowly and quietly until that final moment lands. I could feel the unease growing with every stanza. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦‍⬛



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