Crescent

marissa

The crescent moon

Lurks behind the grey clouds

As storms are passing and falling on

The spark of hope is carried along

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  • Demar Desu

    The moon was beautiful last night…

    • marissa

      I love the crescent moon,i may even go as far as saying it’s as spiritual than a full moon

    • sorenbarrett

      Even behind threatening clouds there remains a spark of hope. Well done

      • marissa

        I hope we can all feel this way!

        • sorenbarrett

          Hope the last to die

        • Tristan Robert Lange

          Marissa, what a lovely piece. I love the contrast between the passing storm and the quiet persistence of hope. The moon may slip from view for a time, but it remains...and somehow that makes all the difference. Beautifully done, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦‍⬛

          • marissa

            It means so much to me that you took the time to read it,thank you for understanding it so perfectly



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