Alliteration's addiction

sorenbarrett

Wooded wonders, wild walks wend with winding ways
Flowering flora find fascination from flaxen folded frays
Bound by beautiful betraying billows bright burning blaze
Hooded hookah heaven's hangover hell's heavy haze
Smothering smoke smells sweet sending seductive sprays
Addiction's alluring answer adds adulterous arrays
Delivering dark dancing delight during drunken days

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  • nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson)

    good write, Ive had a few of these days

  • Paul Bell

    One could be going through alphabet madness.
    I'm liking the adulterous ways, with dark dancing delight during drunken days coming a close second.

    • sorenbarrett

      Thank you Paul for the read and comment. Yes one can get drunk on more than alcohol.

    • Friendship

      Your poem explores the theme of addiction, particularly the allure and consequences associated with substance use. It reflects on the seductive nature of addiction, portraying it as an enticing yet destructive experience. Your imagery evokes both the beauty and the darkness of addiction, emphasizing how it entraps individuals in a cycle of pleasure and pain.

      • sorenbarrett

        Thank you so much Friendship for your read and interpretation of this poem your words are appreciated

      • Lorenz

        Amazing verbal vertigo in the maze of an abyssal vortex !

        • sorenbarrett

          Thanks Lorenz for the read and comment. Appreciated

        • orchidee

          Good write SB.

          • sorenbarrett

            Thank you Orchi I do very much appreciate your read my friend

          • Kevin Hulme

            Fine Wordplay here. 👍

            • sorenbarrett

              Thanks so much Kevin it is most appreciated my friend

            • Tristan Robert Lange

              Soren, what a ride. The musicality pulls everything along beautifully, but beneath it all there’s a growing sense that the destination isn’t nearly as pleasant as the journey first appears. Dark, vivid, and memorable, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦‍⬛

              • sorenbarrett

                Thank you so much for your review my friend it means a lot and is highly anticipated.

              • Teddy.15

                Well I just love everyone after two glasses of wine 🤣 wonderful word play my dear sorrenbarret 🌹

                • sorenbarrett

                  Thanks so much my friend for the read and kind words of support they are most appreciated

                • RSM0812

                  Interesting rhyme scheme with an aura of literation. Good read.

                  • sorenbarrett

                    Thanks for the read and review it is most appreciated



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