The Note to Burn at Midnight

Salvia.S

After all, we HATE people 

Just because we LOVED them

 

- Salvia.S

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  • Alex Arnot

    And sometimes it becomes difficult to distinguish the two. Great write!

    • Salvia.S

      Thank you very much for the read and feedback!!! Very much appreciated!

    • orchidee

      Yes, we can say 'I hate to love you'. Could be the same as 'I love to hate you'. That's my 3 brain cells used up for today, in that bit of a tongue twister. lol.
      And what you doing burning things at midnight? Put that fire out before you go to bed. lol.

      • Salvia.S

        Thank you so much for the read and feedback!! Yeah surely I'll put that fire out πŸ˜„

      • sorenbarrett

        So short and so powerful we do hate people for the same reasons that we love them. Nicely stated

        • Salvia.S

          Thank you very much for the read and feedback!! Very much appreciated!!!

          • sorenbarrett

            You are most welcome Salvia

          • arqios

            Much truth in a coupletπŸ•ŠοΈπŸ™

            • Salvia.S

              Thank you so much for the read and feedback!!!

              • arqios

                Most welcome πŸ™πŸ•ŠοΈ

              • Tristan Robert Lange

                Salvia, what a powerful little gut punch. The brevity makes it land even harder...because beneath those few words sits a truth many of us have witnessed firsthand. Sometimes the deepest wounds come from the places where love once lived. Beautifully done, my friend. πŸŒΉπŸ–€πŸ™πŸ•―οΈπŸ¦β€β¬›

                • Salvia.S

                  Thank you very much Tittu for the read, feedback and the fave ❀️ Much appreciated!



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