the world is always changing not like it was before
there is lots of violence and soldiers sent to war
the planet it is different not like it used to be
with global warming changing the land the sky and sea
theres nothing we can do so we can make it change
its not like it used to be now everything is strange.
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jim56 (
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A good write Jim and for us older that have seen other times it is more evident than for the young that know nothing else.
hi thanks for always lovely comments
means a lot jim
You are most welcome Jim
This has a simple, direct honesty to it—like someone trying to name a feeling of instability without dressing it up.
What stands out is the repetition of “not like it used to be”—it gives the piece a circling, almost weary rhythm, like the mind trying to settle on something familiar but finding everything shifting underneath it.
hi thanks for comment jim
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