olive tree

jim56

i saw a little dove in an olive tree
then he picked a branch and brought the branch to me
he sat upon my shoulder and my troubles seem to cease
i held on to his branch and i could feel his peace


it me feel so tranquil and made feel so calm
i felt oh so safe and well away from harm
then he flew away back in to his tree
left my heart a glow and i felt oh so free

  • Author: jim56 (Offline Offline)
  • Published: June 22nd, 2026 04:27
  • Category: Unclassified
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  • Users favorite of this poem: Caring dove, ms.divine
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  • sorenbarrett

    Nice use of symbols Jim in this poem of nature too that leaves a most peaceful feeling. Well done

    • jim56

      hi thanks for always lovely comments
      means a lot jim

      • sorenbarrett

        Most welcome Jim

      • ms.divine

        I be glad when I get to that level of peace
        Great read

        • jim56

          hi thankyou for lovely comment jim

        • orchidee

          Good write Jim.

          • jim56

            thankyou for comment jim

          • 2781

            That sounds like a spiritual experience.

            • jim56

              hi thanks for lovely comment jim



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