Hic Jacet

Kevin Hulme

Here lies one whose Heart was Blest 

By the Sweetest fruits in finery dressed,

In Memories Warm of joyful Days,

With Bounteous Years  and Joyful ways. 

All Acts did glow upon the Stage,

With Self-Applause I did engage.

For a happier life you'd never find,

With no regrets to bring to mind,

Except-

With the last of my dwindling Mortal Breath,

Her Name I Sighed when took by Death.

 

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  • sorenbarrett

    Clever and I loved the except part. Well written with the reversal and twist

    • Kevin Hulme

      Thank you. Appreciate you reading it.

      • sorenbarrett

        You are most welcome Kevin

      • Tristan Robert Lange

        Kevin, what a turn at the end, my friend. The poem spends so much time celebrating a life well lived that those final lines land with tremendous force. That last lingering thought speaks volumes. Beautiful work. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦‍⬛

        • Kevin Hulme

          Thank you. Appreciate you Reading and Communicating. 👍

        • Tristan Robert Lange

          Kevin, what I admire here is the way the poem presents a life seemingly free of regret, rich in joy and satisfaction, only to reveal one enduring ache at the very end. That final confession reshapes everything that came before it. A beautiful and moving piece, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦‍⬛



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