a suspicious mind conjures its own demons

Demar Desu

I thank God for all 

for letting me understand… 

I am a slave to God 

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  • sorenbarrett

    This piece has a bit of a sardonic feel for being grateful for being a slave is a bit odd. Nicely done Demar

    • Demar Desu

      Big word for me but don’t consider it sardonic, it comes from the same pride like when a son claims his father

    • Tristan Robert Lange

      Amen. Me too, my friend. Me too! Demar, there is something powerful in the simplicity of this, my friend. Just a few words, yet they carry gratitude, humility, and devotion all at once. Wonderful write. πŸŒΉπŸ–€πŸ™πŸ•―οΈπŸ¦β€β¬›



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