i went down to the river to watch the water flow
rolling there so peaceful rolling nice and slow
watched it as rolled down in to the stream
then i closed my eyes and i began to dream
i dreamed of a waterfall as clear as can be
in a land of beauty where i felt so free
i wandered into pastures with valleys oh so green
where everything was tranquil and made me feel serene
there was lots of mountains reaching to the sky
with lots of little bluebirds flying near by
this was just dream a vision that i saw
but i will dream again so i can go again once more
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jim56 (
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Lovely Jim another ideal paradise like dreamscape kept in good rhyme and meter. Nicely done Jim
hi thanks for always lovely comments
means a lot jim
Always a pleasure Jim
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