Babys 'Dry' Out

Kevin Hulme

There's some Recent News that got me Riled,

It a little bit Odd  and really quite Wild.

When Small my Mother would bathe me in -

Australian Larger right up to my Chin.

So it's came  as a Shock to be a 'Foster' Child.

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  • sorenbarrett

    Clever use of words and their play to make the poem work. Well done

    • Kevin Hulme

      Thank you. Appreciate you Reading.

      • sorenbarrett

        You are most welcome Kevin

      • Doggerel Dave

        To think I once drank that stuff: I have more sophisticated, and dare I say safer, tastes now....

        • Kevin Hulme

          'I never drink anything stronger than Pop. But then my Pop drinks like a Fish'. Groucho Marx.
          Thanks for the Read and Comment.

        • Teddy.15

          lol

        • arqios

          Good one, KevinπŸ•ŠοΈπŸ™πŸ€£

          • Kevin Hulme

            Thank you. The Title is a Pun on the Film 'Babys Day Out'. Appreciate you Reading it.

            • arqios

              Appreciate the chuckle.

            • Tristan Robert Lange

              Kevin, this is great fun. The whole thing rolls along so naturally, then that last line sneaks up and delivers the laugh. I thoroughly enjoyed this one, my friend. πŸŒΉπŸ–€πŸ™πŸ•―οΈπŸ¦β€β¬›

              • Kevin Hulme

                Thank you. Glad you enjoyed it. Thank you for the fave also. πŸ‘



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