Spot the kid
Dancing?
Before the mechanicity
Can do its damage
Shamanic technologies
Forge a passage
To autonomic
Liberties
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Author:
Mutley Ravishes (
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A most interesting combination of learning and age passage leading to conditioning and establishment of culture and expectations. Well done
Thanks, Soren. There`s a lesson to be had from A.I, or so Rudolf said!
You are most welcome
This is what I gleaned from reading your poem: before life turns you into someone who just goes through the motions, reconnect with the playful, free part of yourself that you had as a child. 🕊️🙏
Thanks, Arqios. Yes, that`s part of what I was aiming at. It`s not so much "life," more the grip that the intellect and the "intellectual elite" has on society. With the coming dominance of A.I, I rest "my" case. Having said that, I guess its dominance will be short-lived. Maybe this is something we have to experience? What do I know?! Anyways, my heart years for the ancient ways. It will never leave me.
I agree with you that the dominance will be short-lived. We're talking trillionaires now and the greed does not end there. So we move along as the money moves those in power, us along with them. 🙏🕊️
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Mutley, what a thought-provoking piece. The contrast between mechanistic living and shamanic freedom is conveyed with remarkable economy, and it leaves plenty of room for the reader to enter the poem with their own experience. Sometimes the shortest poems open the biggest doors. Wonderful write, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
To just feel the freedom of moving fluidly. Worth more than a million dollars, surely?!
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