use to be a time
where you could get a jump start
now you’re just stranded
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Author:
Demar Desu (Pseudonym) (
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- Category: Haiku
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Comments3
nicely said
Demar my friend the first thing that came to mind as I started reading this was that now you just get jumped. A piece that speaks too much truth about change in society that we that are older find hard to accept. Well done
Demar, this hit me hard. Three lines, and they tell the story of how much the world has changed. There's a sadness here that many people will recognize immediately. Powerful little senryu, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
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