I wish I was as old as you

Aziza S

I wish I met you when I 

Was younger 

 

When I was

Less experienced, and

More oblivious to all your blunders

 

When I didn't 

Discover that

The current you hold

Sweeps us both under

 

When lighting and thunder

Didn't shake & make you rumple and it

Didn't make me wonder

 

What I did wrong

 

But you're in the wrong but so am I  

But maybe we

Somehow wouldn't be

Wrong

At the same time

  • Author: Z (Pseudonym) (Offline Offline)
  • Published: June 28th, 2026 02:56
  • Comment from author about the poem: I like an older guy and I feel like it's a ultimately doomed bc of our "preset" difference
  • Category: Unclassified
  • Views: 23
  • Users favorite of this poem: ms.divine, Aziza S
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Comments3

  • Aziza S

    Also I totally meant RUMBLE loll

  • ms.divine

    Great read

  • sorenbarrett

    Age makes a difference no matter what they say but not always insurmountable. I hear in this poem doubts but the pull is strong to ignore them. Well done



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