flush!
oh what a luxury!
to be able to harness water
flash!
like lighting in a bottle!
to be able to flick on the light switch
but it is you God!
who allowed me to feel!
you allowed my eyes to open…
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Author:
Demar Desu (Pseudonym) (
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- Comment from author about the poem: Is it Sunday?… just feeling thankful this morning…
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Comments4
Gratitude in a poem for convinces as well as to a higher power for feeling at all. Well said Demar
Demar, this really touched me, my friend. I love how it begins with everyday blessings and then gently turns our attention to the greatest gift of all. Beautiful write. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
Nicely said.
what a BANGER. Alhamdulillah ♥️
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