Ask what you want but not what you need.
You notice the cut but not the internal bleed.
Planting an idea or planting a seed.
Time moves at its steady universal speed.
This one takes you to where your thoughts lead.
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Maplespal (Pseudonym) (
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Now this one made me think the first line is quite clear and I would agree. The second also clear but taken as a metaphor needs reference. The third is also metaphoric and I would agree. The forth a Newtonian fact although maybe not at a quantum level. It is the last line that causes most reflection. Well done
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