We've done our best
Just not quite good enough
Be transformed
With a master touch
A brush stroke here
A tweak there
Before you know it
No more despair
Beauty is only a step away
The master is ready
What do you say?
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Author:
Valiantstar (Pseudonym) (
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A soft pitch for transformation, like hope being offered on a painter’s brush—but with just enough tension underneath to wonder who’s really in control.
It feels like invitation and persuasion at the same time, beauty almost close enough to be edited into existence.
and it doth not yet appear what we shall be
Although this seems a deeper layer than the surface speaking to making changes at many levels it makes me think of the superficial desire to be more beautiful than one is and employing a plastic surgeon to do a Michael Jackson makeover. Nicely written
Thanks again, it's doing it's job!
Most welcome
Valiantstar, this really touched me. The image of the Master Artist patiently adding brushstrokes until beauty emerges is both hopeful and uplifting. It reminds us that transformation is a process, not a single moment. Beautiful write, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
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