Look, I'm trying to have fun
Inhaling the rising sun
Lightness of heart
Is an art
But I get all tensed
Up I feel down
It sounds
Like you trying to get
Something's
Identifying with
Limitations
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Author:
Mutley Ravishes (
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Nicely written
Thanks a million!
You're so welcome
A most uplifting poem of joy interrupted with the down beat of restrictions. Well done
Thanks, Soren.
Most welcome
An excellent read, dear Mutley 🙏🏻🕊️
Glad you enjoyed it. Trying to get is deeply embedded!
Indeed!
Don’t allow your thoughts to overwhelm and inhibit you from ‘inhaling the sun’ and having fun 🤩
Well said, Nafisa!
my pleasure !
Mutley, this really resonated with me. The contrast between "inhaling the rising sun" and the gradual tightening into limitation creates an honest reflection on how easily joy can become entangled with overthinking. Thought-provoking write, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
For sure. Trying too hard to "get something," feeling like a fraud if I don`t give it 100% or more. I`m sure you know how it goes!
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