My lady my love
you found out what I'm made of
then I watched you leave me here
I saw you fade into the sun
I thought I was the only one
but you're happy with him
from what I hear
and all our mutual friands
in time they all chose sides
they watched as you laughed and as I cried
it seems so clear now
you were the strong one
in the end
you gave someone your heart
I died inside
Lady my sweet
I've lost my will to live
I wish I had the strength but I don't
I'd like to believe someday I'll rise above
but I know in my heart
I won't
and all our mutual friends
in time they chose a side
they laughed along with you
and watched me cry
it's all so clear now
you were the strong one all along
I curled up and died
you survived
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Author:
lux lucis (Pseudonym) (
Offline) - Published: July 1st, 2026 01:13
- Category: Love
- Views: 5
- Users favorite of this poem: ms.divine, sorenbarrett
- In collections: Black Hole Disease, Red Veil Cycle.
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Comments1
This poem speaks of unrequited love and its effects on the rejected. It speaks in first person giving it power and winds its way through the love of another that has chosen another and the wishing well of the beloved. Very nicely written in a quaint and old fashioned manner that gives it sweetness while also a sense of darkness. Well done and a fave
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