Brainwssh

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Brainwashed!

Brainwashed!

It's an evil disease..

Brainwash the brainwashed...

Do it with ease 

Do it fast

Do it slow 

Do it, so that no one knows...

To reverse the curse that plagues the nations..

Brainwash the brainwashed - make us a new creation. 

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  • sorenbarrett

    Brain washing the selling of a point of view often done over time. Nicely written

  • Tristan Robert Lange

    My friend, this packs a surprising amount into just a handful of lines. The rhythmic repetition, the provocative central idea, and the closing call toward "a new creation" make it linger after the last word. It invites reflection without overstaying its welcome. Wonderfully done, Valiantstar. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦‍⬛



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