Except..

Zellie

She always loved green

Loved the colour of nature

He grew to love her.

Watching her brush her

fingers through the grass,

Pluck sour strawberries,

From their stems.

 

Now his tears glint in the

sunlight as the tress begin to

glow

They both lie here,

Except.....

She's ten feet below.

 

  • Author: Zellie (Offline Offline)
  • Published: July 2nd, 2026 00:40
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  • sorenbarrett

    This poem has a serious twist at the end that hits hard in the last line. The poem turns from sensual love to that of lost love. Well done

    • Zellie

      Thank you so much

      • sorenbarrett

        You are most welcome

      • Friendship

        lovely written

        • Zellie

          Thank youuuu



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