What do the rays
Of the sunrise
Hide
Within their lives?
What can
The Hindustani hands
Do when their fingertips
Meet?
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Author:
Mutley Ravishes (
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Now there are a couple of questions that paint a picture in the mind. Well done
Thanks, Soren.
You are most welcome
Mutley, what an intriguing piece. I love how it begins with the mystery of sunrise and ends with the mystery of human touch, leaving the reader suspended somewhere between the two. It asks more than it answers, and I think that's exactly where its strength lies. Beautifully done, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
Let you in on a little "secret." I included two "practices" I learnt within this rhyme. Both so simple it almost beggars belief. That is the true intent of the rhyme!
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