hey mr sunshine

jim56

hey mr sunshine shine your light on me 
make me feel so bright and set my spirit free 


send down all your warmth and let me feel the heat 
let me see your glow making life so sweet 


give me your sweet smile and brighten up my day 
hey mr sunshine dont ever go away

  • Author: jim56 (Offline Offline)
  • Published: July 4th, 2026 05:29
  • Category: Unclassified
  • Views: 24
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  • sorenbarrett

    The beat of this poem together with the opening wording made me think of Mr. Tamborine man by Bob Dylan. This more cheery in its wording. Good job Jim

    • jim56

      hi thanks for always lovely comments
      means a lot jim

      • sorenbarrett

        Most welcome Jim

      • RSM0812

        A gentle poem of love, hope and warmth. Enjoyed very much.

        • jim56

          hi thankyou so much. for lovely comment jim



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