Hollow Hands

gray0328

 

There is a tremble in the pour,  

a bravado that fits like armor.  

We raise glasses high, a fragile defiance,  

as if to trap the moment inside.  

 

The burn dances down the throat,  

a ghost pretending to be warmth.  

It makes promises it cannot keep—  

softened edges, lighter hearts,  

a reconciliation with ourselves  

that never truly arrives.  

 

We laugh louder, chase the elusive spark,  

our reflections blurred, yet stark.  

What's false begins to feel like home,  

a lullaby of denial, sweet and sour.  

 

There is no clock in this room.  

Time waltzes backward, then slumps forward.  

And in its erratic rhythm, we forget  

what the world outside even feels like.  

 

Hands turn hollow against the glass,  

but still, we press our palms to it,  

aching for whatever shimmers  

on the other side.

  • Author: gray0328 (Offline Offline)
  • Published: July 5th, 2026 09:22
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  • nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson)

    Good write

  • sorenbarrett

    Well Gray this poem could convey many meanings but the one that I took as I read it was returning to the past with a backward clock through pressing our hands against the glass becomes a fantasy in that we can not pass through that glass but our minds do and in fantasy we focus on what could have been. A lovely write

    • gray0328

      It's about the absolute insanity of the disease of alcoholism. Doing the same thing over and over and expecting a different results. Thank You Soren

      • sorenbarrett

        You are most welcome Gray That is insanity for sure



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