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ThatsSoRavenn

There are only so many times

a heart can quietly ask,

 

“Are we okay?”

 

before it gets too tired

to ask again.

 

Not because it stopped caring.

 

But because every unanswered hope

becomes a little heavier to carry.

 

I don’t need perfect words.

 

I don’t need promises.

 

I think I just need to know

that someone would notice

if I stopped reaching.

 

Because there comes a point

where even the softest pleas

begin to sound like echoes—

 

and the silence

starts convincing you

 

that maybe

you were the only one

who heard them.

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  • sorenbarrett

    There is a sound of alienation in this write. Well done

  • Tristan Robert Lange

    Raven, this hit me hard…the exhaustion of asking and not being met is so quietly devastating. That fear of going unnoticed if you stopped reaching is what stays with me, and honestly, I’ve lived that same silence myself. Beautifully written, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦‍⬛



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