My birthday

Allie561

Another candle to the cake

Happy birthday to me

I feel another back ache

As most would agree

A whole year older

Sort of hits you like a boulder

Oh well

Happy birthday to me

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  • sorenbarrett

    With every passing year I feel this like a bullet. Well written

    • Allie561

      I can attest to that! Many more to come hopefully, thanks Soren

      • sorenbarrett

        You are most welcome

      • Friendship

        Nicely said. Happy Birthday, my friendπŸ₯³πŸŽ‚πŸŽ‰

        • Allie561

          Thank you friendship! It’s much appreciated!

        • Tristan Robert Lange

          Allie, this gave me a smile. It's short, lighthearted, and so easy to relate to...especially that realization that another birthday somehow comes with a few extra creaks. Happy Birthday, my friend, and wonderful write! πŸŽ‚πŸŒΉπŸ–€πŸ™πŸ•―οΈπŸ¦β€β¬›

          • Allie561

            Ah so true! Thank you dearly, friend! Glad I made it to another one lol



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