and as her hips curve
my eyes wander to her breasts
and then to her lips…
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Author:
Demar Desu (Pseudonym) (
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- Category: Haiku
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Comments3
A good read my friend I am the opposite first the face then the body. Well done
Well you did give me a chuckle, 💋 🤣
Demar, I like how much you leave unsaid here...it's brief, but it captures that familiar progression of attraction in just a few lines. The King of Concise strikes again! Nicely done, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
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