Got love?

Demar Desu

and as her hips curve 

my eyes wander to her breasts 

and then to her lips… 

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  • sorenbarrett

    A good read my friend I am the opposite first the face then the body. Well done

  • Teddy.15

    Well you did give me a chuckle, 💋 🤣

  • Tristan Robert Lange

    Demar, I like how much you leave unsaid here...it's brief, but it captures that familiar progression of attraction in just a few lines. The King of Concise strikes again! Nicely done, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦‍⬛



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