The early bird
Catches the ear-
-ly morning
Sun light
Of our lives
In the cells
Where else
Would it dwell?
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Author:
Mutley Ravishes (
Offline) - Published: July 11th, 2026 07:29
- Comment from author about the poem: With thanks to Demar and Mikhael for the inspiration.
- Category: Unclassified
- Views: 15
- Users favorite of this poem: Tristan Robert Lange
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Comments4
The cells and photosynthesis! Superb🙏🕊️
Yes. And then the idea that when we breathe in, we are not "just" breathing in air, but also sunlight!
cool!
Clever word play in this poem casts different meaning and preserves the first line intent. Nicely done
Thanks, Soren. I hope it wasn`t too clever! No wait, no way, Mutley!
Most welcome Mutley
That break in "ear- / -ly" caught my eye right away. It's a clever little twist that slows the reader down before the poem opens into something larger. Nicely done, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
Hopefully 37 trillion times larger! Thanks for dropping by, Tristan.
Very well penned dear Mutley!
Thank you! It was fun to write.
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