Mental prison

Lorenz

Mechanic with high functioning autism.

 Pathological  mutism .

Gears turning in  melodic vacuum .

Engineering of sandcastle built on the wind.

Silence as cold as marble burning like a grave flower .

An echo of the gospel still  resonates 

in a nightmare-like scene featuring birds ...

 Hitchcock get out of this Buddha !

Insomnia in crisis offers a clear-eyed 

look at the night ...

Writing a story made up of fragments 

from the afterlife , full of distortions

and dissociations .

 Insane watchmaking .

 E : (Messianic dramaturgy )  

   Matter equals madness .

The hunter waits sipping a gin in a cozy  soul's lounge .

Nutcase,wandering through the nothingness 

stripped of its ugliness ... 

  Bitter grapevine  .

 Devil ,last customer  .

Tomorrow the tide will wash you up 

in the cold storage dream ...

   How to say'' Je t'aime '' To an empty bottle ?

 Limbo of a trance -connected neuronal system.

This slot machine always dispenses bogus cash ...

 The gates of the mental prison always remain 

open with a season from hell ...

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  • Ellen Marsell

    The mind longs to make sense of the world, yet the world always resists understanding.

    • Lorenz

      Poetry which is free from the constraints of reason can exress what psychology , medicine or philosophy are unable to articulate .

    • sorenbarrett

      This is a Jackson Pollock word painting in digital display. Well done in this Picasso Guernica mural on a poetic wall.

      • Lorenz

        The art of painting words into music !

        • sorenbarrett

          Stravinsky or Jethro Tull?

        • Tristan Robert Lange

          Lorenz, what a powerful piece. "How to say 'Je t'aime' to an empty bottle?" especially caught me, but the entire poem carries that dreamlike, disorienting atmosphere where one striking image gives way to the next. It left me thinking long after I finished reading. Beautifully done, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦‍⬛

          • Lorenz

            An inner journey through thr ruins of consciousness where images emerge and fade like fragments of memory ...

          • rhmn_7

            A haunting illusion of an inescapable mind, where false rewards trap consciousness in cycles of torment. Nice poem dear Lorenz!

            • Lorenz

              My prison like a space of freedom and creativity !



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