Family Gathers
friends arrive
flowers fade
voices soften
hands reach
fingers touch
tears glisten
eyes meet
breaths ebb
lips tremble
breathing slows
LAST BREATH
stillness settles
silence listens
ripples widen
faces paused
sunlight softens
memories resurface
half-smiles through tears
grief embraced
thankful we're here
coming together
Love Remains
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Author:
John Richard Anderson (Pseudonym) (
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Comments2
A most creative format that follows the flow of emotions and actions in the poem. Very nice a fave
this is a cool way to write!!
I call the form - criss-cross pivot - the central word is the pivot and the direction shifts before and after it
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