As chosen,
I sit
inside this arrangement,
matching posture for space,
drawn into
a sketchbook's open page.
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Author:
crypticbard (Pseudonym) (
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- Category: Reflection
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Comments8
simple but powerful my friend
Thank you dear friend 🙏🏻🕊️
most welcome
Arqios, this is beautifully spare. There’s a quiet tension in being placed somewhere and then adjusting yourself to fit what has already been arranged. Thoughtful piece, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
A still life portrait🙏🏻🕊️
A reflection indeed where an artist self aware of coice, physical form and state of consciousness. The qualities of any artist much more a poet.
Glad that came through the pond! Thank you, Soren. Most appreciated, my friend. 🙏🏻🕊️
My pleasure Cryptic
There’s a quiet feeling of surrender here, like the speaker is accepting a place already drawn for them. The sketchbook image is damn effective—it makes identity feel both chosen and arranged by someone else.
Thanks, Thomas. That is definitely spot on. Much appreciated, as always. 🙏🏻🕊️
Good write A.
Thanks O 🙏🏻🕊️
To me this is sitting in front of a Screen or a Piece of paper writing a Poem and Waiting.
A good Write.
Yes! That is most apt dear Kevin. Thank You🙏🏻🕊️
My Pleasure.
Such a creative way of describing that image, Well done!!! Claaaapppssss
Thank you most kindly🙏🏻🕊️
short, sweet, and carrying a good message...
Most thankful for your visits, reads and much valued comments 🙏🏻🕊️
My pleasure 👍💅
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