Exposed

Fränz Müller

Walking into the kitchen

you find me, naked

sipping coffee, smiling;

you return the smile, and

after looking me up and down

give a sleepy wave

in the early morning glow

and blow kisses to the one

who adores you.

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Comments4

  • isa kemmy

    es errineret mich an die gutes altes Gedächtnis, est ist sehr schön

  • Thomas W Case

    There’s a sweet intimacy here, finding love in the ordinary moments before the world wakes up.
    A simple kitchen scene becomes a warm little portrait of affection, comfort, and quiet devotion.

  • sorenbarrett

    Suggestive and sensual it turns warm and welcoming a lovely reassuring poem or relationship.

  • Tristan Robert Lange

    Fränz, this really warmed my heart. There's something so beautifully ordinary about this moment, and that's exactly what makes it special. Love doesn't always need grand gestures. Wonderful write, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦‍⬛



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