in the loop

Tristan Robert Lange


Notice of absence from Tristan Robert Lange
Life is full of seasons. This is a season of transition for me, where I will be moving with my family to a new location. As such, with much logistics to consider, I am doing my best to keep up. Please know if I accidentally don't respond, it is not because I am ghosting or becoming distant. Once things settle after the move, I am sure life will return to some normalcy. In the meantime, and always:

Read 👓, Write ✍️, Rise 🌅, Realize 🤯.

Tristan 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦‍⬛
in order to get the gist
i took my knotted fist
punched it through the gizzard
of a giant wizard lizard,
king of a magma river,
walking away like a shiver
from condensational fuzz.
float along on the buzz,
a hive of robot stop abodes
on a train that rides roads.
choo-freaking-choo
don’t stop, don’t hit no brake,
swerving on like a rattlesnake,
the nonagon doors open infinitely,
go on, enter indiscriminantly.
 
don’t believe me?—
the scoop is in the loop—
can’t escape to even poop.
 
© 2026 Tristan Robert Lange. All rights reserved.
First published on tristanrobertlange.com, July 14, 2026.
 
Tittu
  • Author: Tristan Robert Lange (Offline Offline)
  • Published: July 14th, 2026 07:23
  • Comment from author about the poem: Part of the Wait. What?!? collection. A playful absurdist tribute to King Gizzard & the Lizard Wizard (https://kinggizzard.bandcamp.com/)...particularly the wonderfully inescapable Nonagon Infinity (enter in from any track, play on repeat and try it out, https://kinggizzard.bandcamp.com/album/nonagon-infinity-2). If you've never explored the band, do yourself a favor. They've wandered through psychedelic rock, folk, jazz, metal, garage rock, jam music, synth-pop, microtonal experiments, and more. Chances are they've made an album for at least one corner of your musical taste. Go ahead. Look them up. I dare you. Double dare, even.
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  • Users favorite of this poem: Salvia.S, RSM0812
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  • nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson)

    a helter skelter of a read my friend

  • sorenbarrett

    I love the style of music from my era. White rabbit, purple haze, strawberry fields forever. Not familiar with this one though. A fun write with the rhyme that bounced it along to the end. Well done my friend.

    • Tristan Robert Lange

      Soren, thank you, my friend! Definitely look up King Gizzard & the Lizard Wizard. With the music you named, I think Float Along...Fill Your Lungs would hit your psychedelic sensibilities perfectly. You can stream it free on Bandcamp, and their downloads (stuido and live) are essentially free too, though Bandcamp makes you enter at least $1.

      Band: https://kinggizzard.bandcamp.com
      Album: https://kinggizzard.bandcamp.com/album/float-along-fill-your-lungs

      Would love to know what you think! 🦎🌋🌀🙏

      • sorenbarrett

        Very metal sound on strings it holds a most psychedelic feel to it with bent notes and the rush of passages. Its in and out volume distancing the sound gives further feel of this altered state as does repetition. Sudden cut offs leave the ears almost stopped. The auditory effects with its revs and cut offs give further feelings of such and its reverberations add the tactile feel. Wails with indistinct indistinguishable words make one feel in an in-between state while high pitched whistles add an agitated feel. The mixing on this one was perfect for the effect. As it calms down one feels that the state is wearing off. The beat of the drum like a heart beat. And then it fades out. It was a trip by itself I can imagine what it would be like if on something. Nice

      • Salvia.S

        A dizzying stream of wordplay and wild visuals, it pulls you into its loop and keeps spinning with energy. Very well written dearest Tittu ❤️ A fave 🌹

        • Tristan Robert Lange

          You got it, dearest Salvia! Thanks for the fave! Now you need to experience the band that sent me into this particular spiral. King Gizzard & the Lizard Wizard built Nonagon Infinity to loop forever, with every song flowing into the next. You can start on any track, put it on repeat all, and let it go. It's hard to wrap one's head around until it's experienced. Fun album. You can stream the whole album free here:

          https://kinggizzard.bandcamp.com/album/nonagon-infinity-2

          I have a strong feeling you’ll love them! 🦎🌋🌀🙏

        • Shaunmatthewcpoetry

          Great, loved it!

          • Tristan Robert Lange

            Thank you, Shaun! Much appreciated, my friend! 🦎🌋🌀🙏

          • orchidee

            Good write T. P. Solus is in the loop for spinach supplies! lol.

            • Tristan Robert Lange

              Ah, Orchi, P. Solus has infiltrated the Robot Stop warehouse, seized the spinach, and declared himself King of the Nonagon. Someone alert NARCAN before he attempts a tenth side! LOL! 🦎🌋🌀🙏

            • RSM0812

              This give me a message of power and control. Nice write.

              • Tristan Robert Lange

                Thank you! The speaker charges ahead as though steering the trip, but the loop ultimately owns the destination. Glad you enjoyed it, my friend! 🦎🌋🌀🙏

              • Neville



                it's the place to be .. checked out n knocked out .. phew survived .. Neville 🐦‍⬛🐧🖤🐈‍⬛🏴

                • Tristan Robert Lange

                  Haha, glad you made it through alive, Neville! The doors remain open if you dare another circuit, my friend! 🦎🌋🌀🙏



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