The echo of
Pianos note
That travelled sweet
Without a coat
Upon windows and walls
Cold Winter chill
Is kept deep inside
Memorys window sill.
The bird that pecks
The windows glass
While inside
The music class
Still remembered
A vibrant tune
I miss you still
My heart to swoon.
A thousand years
Or so it seems
Cramped and crowded
Within my dreams.
A silken veil
Between two worlds
The girl who never
Knew I cared.
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nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson) (
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There is such a note of sadness and melancholy in this write Norman it sings softly in metaphor that touches the heart and calls faintly from a distant place one has been before but can not quite recall. Lovely, a bit fragile and a fave
Most kind, thanking you and as always much appreciated
Most welcome Norman
Solemn and intimate. 🙏🕊️
thanks for read always appreciated friend
Most welcome 🙏🏻🕊️
Between two worlds - Earth and ..... Mars? you waited for a bus. lol.
the real world and the imaginary world where buses turn up lol
Yes, in some world far away - a bus turns up. lol. Will it go to the Co-op?
I am sure it will lol
You should set some of your lyrics to music !
Ive been told that many times my friend, thanks for read much appreciated as always
Lovely written. Your poem explores the complexity of human emotions, particularly the pain of unexpressed love and the passage of time that separates the poet from the one they care for.
thanking you for such kind comments, always much appreciated
Norman, this really touched me. It carries that bittersweet feeling of remembering someone who never knew the place they held in your heart. Quietly beautiful, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
most kind, thanking you as always very much appreciated
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