Refreshment Request

orchidee



Tune: Hawkhurst

('Come, gracious Spirit, heavenly dove')

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Come to us, Lord, where dry we be

And meet our thirst refreshingly

Water of life, land of our heart

Come fulfil us in every part

 

The promised rain send to renew

Supplies they all depend on you

Without you we parched and arid

As if a desert place amid

 

Then watered we be, not dull, dry

Nor dingy, dusty, by and by

Your Spirit in us still resides

E'en when at times seems subdued, hides

 

Our own inspirings from your grace

And so to bless others, we trace

For we your witnesses freely

By your renewing we now be

 

  • Author: orchidee (Offline Offline)
  • Published: July 17th, 2026 09:28
  • Comment from author about the poem: A hymn-poem in 8.8.8.8. This combines our spiritual thirst, and the thirst of a dry land.
  • Category: Spiritual
  • Views: 23
  • Users favorite of this poem: Tristan Robert Lange
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  • arqios

    Such a fun title as well O🕊️🙏🏻

    • orchidee

      Thank you A.

      • arqios

        Welcome O.

      • Tristan Robert Lange

        What a refreshing hymn, Orchi! The movement from spiritual exhaustion to renewal and outward witness is beautifully carried throughout. Even Popeyeus Glug Maximus Solus might trade his spinach for a little living water after this one! Nah...prob not. Still, wonderful work, my friend. 🤣 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦‍⬛

        • orchidee

          Thank you T. I was rather thinking of the 'dryness' as 'writers block' etc. Oh woe, will anything quench Mr P. Solus' thirst for spinach? Nope! lol.

        • sorenbarrett

          Another wonderful hymn Orchi. These bring back memories of my childhood and Sunday church. Well done my friend

          • orchidee

            Thank you SB.

            • sorenbarrett

              You are most welcome Orchi

            • Doggerel Dave

              I certainly developed a thirst, orchi. Not diversifying into the soft drinks business are ya?

              • orchidee

                Thank you Dave. lol. I\'m on the gin - hic! Sir Orchi NS dunno wot he's drinking half the time.

                • Doggerel Dave

                  Which gin do you recommend? I've converted to gin with a splash o dry vermouth. You taking the gin and leaving the vermouth to him, you delinquent you.....



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