a soldier came

jim56

a soldier came from heaven he came and sat with me 
he told me of the angels and now his life was free 
told me of the day when he had to die 
told me of his loved ones and how he watched them cry 


he told me he was safe and with the lord above 
no more blood or battle from now on only love 
he was up in heaven where his war would cease 
he was with the angels. now he could rest in peace

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  • sorenbarrett

    A lovely write Jim full of a wonderful dream and wish. Lovely

    • jim56

      hi thanks for always lovely comments
      means a lot jim

      • sorenbarrett

        Most welcome Jim

      • Kevin Hulme

        As Someone who reads a lot of the 'War Poets' ,
        I enjoyed your Write. Good One. 👍

        • jim56

          hi thanks for comment glad you liked poem jim

          • Kevin Hulme

            My Pleasure.

          • RSM0812

            A good read with picturesque and moral message. Great job.

            • jim56

              thankyou for comment jim



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