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tinyelephant

drowning in mental instability

i'm loosing sight of my abilities

 

i've come so far in my mind

buried my old self, set her in binds

 

can't wait to die, but not by my hand

melancholic alcoholic in a dry land

 

i don't allow myself to feel anymore

i can't allow myself to love anymore

 

three hearts in an early grave

my conscience attached like a slave

 

the bliss of eternal rest

for me now, seems best

 

 

  • Author: lai lai (Pseudonym) (Offline Offline)
  • Published: July 19th, 2026 19:18
  • Category: Reflection
  • Views: 13
  • Users favorite of this poem: Fränz Müller
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  • peto

    Welcome Tiny
    Great debut
    Loved the alcoholic line
    Looking forward to reading more from you

    • tinyelephant

      omg thank you so much that means a lot to me :)))))

    • Friendship

      Welcome . Nicely done, strong and hard.

      • tinyelephant

        thank you so much friendship :))))

      • sorenbarrett

        A death poem it seems yet so calm and patient. Nicely done

        • tinyelephant

          thank you, glad you enjoyed :))))

          • sorenbarrett

            You are most welcome



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