Under the sentimental night sky
rain breathing
in anticipation
before it dampens the dry
They stood staring into each other eyes
outside an old Honky Tonk dive
romance lit by loosely strewn Christmas lights
and a cool, pool of a moon observing from up high
The world narrowed by a gaze
longing distilled by irises that barely hesitate
sparks radiate as inner fires rage
a love that persists despite mistakes
Feet stepping at a ballad's pace
scuffling against the dirt parking lot pave
eyes study each other's face
until one kiss ignites the flame
-
Author:
8Blackwidow8 (
Offline) - Published: July 20th, 2026 14:42
- Category: Love
- Views: 12
- Users favorite of this poem: Teddy.15
Offline)
Comments2
All it takes is a spark and the result a conflagration. Well done most romantic
Thank you. 🙂
You are most welcome
I'm a huge fan of patsy cline and of this poetry it's stunning, my favourite poetry is on love and here I got so much emotion with beautifully crafted imagery. 🌹
You and me both on Patsy. Thank you Teddy.15.
A huge welcome to my Poetic side 💜
To be able to comment and rate this poem, you must be registered. Register here or if you are already registered, login here.