Night

Kaz

A love for the night 

Silent streets, starry sky, yet

I do not venture 

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  • soheil khodaparasti

    A beautifully concise depiction of the inner conflict between desire and restraint: the speaker is drawn to the beauty and tranquility of the night, but some unseen barrier prevents the speaker from venturing out.

  • sorenbarrett

    A beautiful senryu that is sensuous and enticing. Well done

    • Kaz

      Sorenbarrett thank you 😊

      • sorenbarrett

        You are most welcome



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