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tinyelephant

separated by time and space

devastated by truths I cannot face

 

unavoidable tears try to break free

unassuming an identity I cannot be

 

society building a great wall

between my lover, and any hope at all

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  • sorenbarrett

    Very well worded with good rhyme this poem presents the problem of society and its expectations getting in the way of a relationship. Very nicely done in few words a fave

    • tinyelephant

      omgg thank you again, luv your poems too :)))

      • sorenbarrett

        My pleasure and thank you



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