Dance Without Stopping
Move your soul
come into my world
that gentle fantasy
where to dance slowly
where love dances
come to shine bright
That sweet and singular place
in the manna of kindness
where everything is possible
close your eyes and dance
let everything happen
let yourself be the center
the center of all
Where to shine
dance with me
with the stars
lift off from the body
dance among the stars
day and night let us dance
Bodies that glide
in that world where to exist
to exist in the paradise of love
Dance with the stars
dance in the sky
dance with me
in the sky
of the earth
without fatigue
without sorrow
in love
together
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Author:
Carlos Alberto BUSTILLOS (
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Comments3
Nicely done
Thanks for the support, glad you liked it! 😊
I love how you use dance as a major part of this poem. In our society we have lost the meaning of dance where there are specific moves and steps to follow where it is choreographed. Dance real dance is from inside the self where the body takes over and movement becomes emotion. Love a most powerful emotion drives the dance. Nicely written Carlos
ou absolutely got the essence of the poem. Real dance is pure feeling and freedom, not just choreography.
Thanks for such a meaningful comment!
You are most welcome Carlos
Carlos, what a lovely and uplifting piece! The dreamlike atmosphere creates a place beyond weariness and sadness…where two people are completely free to share joy and love. Beautiful work, my friend! 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
Thank you, Tristan! That’s exactly what I wanted to convey: a space to escape the weight of the world and just be free
. Appreciate the kind words, my friend!
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