I can be such a—
sigh… I should watch what I say
the tongue is a tool…
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Author:
Demar Desu (Pseudonym) (
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- Comment from author about the poem: I want to speak more positively
- Category: Haiku
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Comments2
Indeed the tongue is a tool upon which we can cut ourselves as well as others. Nicely done Demar
Demar, you got me with this one! Clever, playful, and wonderfully self-aware. Excellent senryu, my friend. ⚔️👅😂🙏
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