It's been said some Human Hearts are made of gold
But Truth be Told
Human Hearts are more like silver
They corrode
The only way to see them shine again
Is to strip part of it away and watch a new person begin
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Faded Silhouette (
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A great metaphor cleverly crafted in rhyme. Well done
A very touching song, just like its theme about the inner state of the heart, which is already sensitive by itself. It touches on a universal truth about the human being.
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