Morning's buttered sun pours light's honey over layered rock cakes spilling shadows in drops coffee black. A flowered and green tilted plate where a thin trail wends its way through leafy bordering byways. Birds call like singing utensils and the aroma of nature's kitchen wafts through the out doors. Tongue tasting lightly salted, skin basted turning brown. I walk between moss and vine table cloth decorated stone tables and rock chairs. The fresh mountain air is on the menu.
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sorenbarrett (
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a great picture painted here my friend
Thank you Norman I do appreciate your read and kind comment.
always welcome friend
Beautifully written.
"Morning's buttered sun" and "light's honey" are striking images.
Thank you so much for the review Soheil your support and kind words are deeply appreciated
You are welcome. I wish you continued inspiration and fulfillment in your poetry.
Your kind wishes are my inspiration
Thank you so much for your kind words.
Wow, metaphor of mother nature I could see the whole scene, sorrenbarret if you ever decide to have a small workshop I would join immediately, forever inspiring dear friend. 🌹
You are too kind my friend and your encouragement is deeply appreciated
What a wonderful place.Exellently discribed.I was transported there
Thank you my friend your words are most important to me and serve as encouragement and are most appreciated
What a beautifully imaginative write, Soren. Turning the entire landscape into an open-air breakfast is wonderfully playful…the natural world feels nourishing in every possible way. Excellent work, my friend. 🌄🌿☕🖤🙏
Thanks my friend I could not help it after a six and a half mile walk down and up the mountain where I live at breakfast time. Your encouragement is most important to me Tristan
An excellent word-picture, Soren🙏🏻🕊️
Thank you Cryptic one can not help but be inspired by nature. I appreciate the support my friend.
Most welcome dear friend 🕊️🙏🏻
Nice write
Thank you Friendship for the read and kind words of support they are appreciated.
Do you have also some talents as a landscape painter ?
Do landscape but don't paint. Thanks for the read and comment my friend
A most beautiful write! Mornings are the best and this write puts it in perfect perspective
Thank you Sharon for the read and comment it is most appreciated
Enjoyable Poem describing Food as Nature. A fave 👍
Thanks for the read Kevin it is deeply appreciated
A very original developed metaphor about nature as food, a menu, and a feast. Oh, you hungry ones, for the beauty and taste of natural life, join in! That's how that poem sounds to me.
Thank you Durdica for the read and interpretation. Indeed that is the feel I have for nature the difference of eating a natural food as opposed to eating a plastic and cardboard manufactured one with chemical additives for flavor. Your words are most appreciated.
You are welcome. I understand your priorities and your love for natural living and resistance to artificial things.
I am a pragmatist that occasionally eats junk and enjoys it at the moment for what it is, knowing its danger but accepting it in a moment when nothing better is available. However, I prefer the natural and seek it whenever possible.
Now that paints a picture very eloquently. Love the descriptions you've chosen so much that I want to be there!
Thanks so much for your read my friend your kind words of encouragement are most appreciated and valued
Lovely
Thanks so much for the read and word of support
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