THE DUNES

nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson)

From across the dunes
You can smell the bay
Its salted mischief
Waves at play
Their white tips break
In rolling display
The fishing boats
Seek their pay.

The old wreck
A skeletoned frame
Missing ribs
Its silent grave
The high sails
A memory gone
Each breaker hits
Green algae in sun.

Lonesome tide pools
Where children play
Laughter swoons
Throughout the day
Chasing crabs
A starfish found
Water to ankles
Wet shoes sound.

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Comments7

  • Teddy.15

    Ah the secrets of the ocean, maybe there is also some treasure close by, a lovely image I have reminds me of home. 🌹

  • sorenbarrett

    Descriptive and full of images this poem speaks to the familiarity and memories of such a place. It tells of gaiety and brightness. Lovely

  • Tristan Robert Lange

    Norman, what a wonderfully vivid coastal poem. This carried me straight to the shoreline…the salt air, weathered history, and childhood joy all alive together. Beautiful write, my friend. πŸŒŠβš“πŸšπŸ–€πŸ™

  • arqios

    The dunes and the wind and the sun! These were and are the days πŸ•ŠοΈπŸ™πŸ»

    • nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson)

      beautiful memories, thanking you much appreciated

      • arqios

        Most welcome, friend πŸ•ŠοΈπŸ™πŸ»

      • Friendship

        Nicely written

      • Lorenz

        That reminds me of the flemish coast ...

      • NafisaSB

        A nicely detailed and descriptive piece of poetry βœŒοΈπŸ‘



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