Some life eased out on hollow breath
The countdown to his lonely death
A shooting star it fell to earth
The queen of broken hearts
A soul once ripe now rots away
Sun missing from the sky today
A crumbling wreck beneath her bay
The queen of broken hearts
The pent up pain it forms a scream
Along with love she took his dream
A cat no longer tasting cream
The queen of broken hearts
Her satin touch will slowly fade
He fell so hard upon her blade
The price it has in full been paid
The queen of broken hearts
Far in the distance out of sight
Some hope grows in the darkest night
Another guides him to the light
The queen of mended hearts
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Author:
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Comments2
A great write that well could be a song. Nicely written
Thank you soren
For your continued support
It's truly appreciated
You are most welcome
Beautifully written. My friend, your poem delves into themes of heartache, the emotional toll of love lost, and the transformative power of hope. It personifies love as a “queen” who can both cause pain and ultimately lead to healing.
Thank you friendship
Means a lot coming from one so talented
Much obliged
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