On the canvas of my daydream ,
I cast the overchanging landscape
of an unknown girl
twin of all my follies ...
Together we went on a long journey ,
only to never meet ...
A pinch of salt that isn't quite dry
and sticks to your lips .
And this curve of a tender breast
that sleeps away ...
Please hold the pose love !
You sweep me into the dizzying whirlwind
of your imaginary world ,
a heady jazz sound in the moon ...
Liquid flame burning in my Harlequin's heart ,
which captivates the appareances of the seasons...
I imprint the seal of solitude on the parchment .
Elusive perfume of your senses
at my intimate celebrations ...
I 'm waiting for to complete this landscape
behind Mona Lisa 's enigma ...
You are not the virgin holding the autistic child .
Prima donna posing nude .
A little cheeky a tad indecent ...
That's how I long for you .
Portrait that remains unfinished .
Features changing at the will of an inspired vertigo...
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Author:
lorenz (Pseudonym) (
Online) - Published: July 31st, 2026 11:27
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Comments5
I heard that DaVinci hauled the painting with him everywhere constantly fiddling with it until he died. I think that he was just economizing using a already used canvass
The mystery of the Da Vinci clone ...
The greatest compliment is plagiarism
a most wonderful write and a fav my friend
At the quest of my feminine archetype .
the hero of the mentor
My heroine..
Solitude is the seal of the creator.
Maybe not so alone after all..With the multitude that lives within me !
Lorenz, what a mesmerizing piece. The dreamlike movement from image to image keeps the poem alive, while that unfinished portrait gives all the longing a fitting home. It embraces mystery instead of resolving it, and I think that’s exactly where its beauty lies. Excellent write, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
A poetic quest for an aesthetic hypothesis...
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