Anna and Abe have decided to take things one step at a time. Abe had just one final thing for her; a special surprise. Abe asks if she remembers her tree house from long ago. Of course Anna remembers; it meant a lot to both of them; a special place for them to go. “I’ve something to show you. Just trust me.” He says; she closes her eyes; and Abe puts the blindfold over her head. They walk up the road for a little while; as he takes off the blindfold, Anna just smiles. Abe has built for her(for both of them) a replica of the tree house into their home! With the flower bed of her dreams; and the finishing touches of Anna finally coming back; leaving Abe less alone. Anna is out of words and isn’t sure what to say; “I’m hoping Anna one day you’ll marry me. Anna says yes! And this is the end. I hope you’ll become enjoyed your stay at sweet treats my friends!
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GenXer Sharon 🙏🍀 (
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A fairytale ending for a good story. Nicely done
Good write
Good write GS, which KP didn't ruin. lol.
Sharon, what a lovely piece. The return to the tree house beautifully ties together the past and the future, making the proposal feel all the more special. It closes the journey with warmth, hope, and a genuine sense of home. Beautifully done, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
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