Brief moments when a soldier turns into God, a traveler is Ulysses, an athlete Hercules.
When the crowds bow, an actor has become his part, a poet is the poem and in that brief second one is immortal.
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well put my friend, the pinnacle
Thank you Norman for the review of this piece. Your words are most important to me my friend.
always most welcome
Take the bow while you can, it will only be a brief time in life.
How many times have we said to ourselves. I was there when it happened.
Thanks Paul your review and words are most valued and appreciated. Indeed it is true.
How beautifully you use mythology as a metaphor for those moments when ordinary people transcend themselves, expressing the idea that true greatness comes from fully embodying one's purpose, and that achievements reached in this way become unforgettable.
One word about you: your human warmth shines through not only in your poems but also in your comments. That makes you something rare today—a genuinely caring human being. I noticed this in your response to a poem that lacked imagery; your own comment was rich with imagery, making your criticism both instructive and creative. At times, it seems that you write poems not merely as an outlet for your emotional burdens or inner conflicts, but from a deep sense of responsibility toward others. That, to me, is a rare and admirable quality.
You kind words humble me and your generosity moves me Soheil. You seem an embodiment of what you list as others virtues and I thank you for your read and gracious comment. I truly believe that we are all one and that to treat another with kindness is but to treat oneself with that same kindness. We are all literally but cells making up one living life source and why should the eye deceive the ear or the foot betray the hand.
Thank you for your beautiful and thoughtful words. Your response is not only gracious but also wonderfully poetic, expressing a profound sense of connection, compassion, and shared humanity.
I appreciate the humility and generosity of spirit behind your message, and I feel grateful for the opportunity to share this exchange with someone who conveys such warmth and wisdom.
You are too kind but the feeling is mutual
Good write SB. Yes, KP thinks she is immortal, but grows more OLD trout-like each day. lol.
Thanks so much Orchi for the review and comment. Yes we all feel immortal at times and at others we fear death
A Soldier turning into God. The ability to choose Life or Death.
The Idea to list People and Occupations to something one step higher was a good one
A fave for sure.
Thank you so much my friend for the review and understanding comment it means a lot.
My Pleasure.
Soren, what a thought-provoking piece. I love the progression through myth, art, and poetry, all leading to those rare moments when a person seems to become one with their calling. It’s concise, yet it leaves the mind wandering long after the last line. Powerful write, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
Thank you so much Tristan I appreciate your review and most generous comment.
Geez Soren did you let out a fart and got inspired? Great poem old man
Thanks I guess Demar hot air comes from both ends.
Good one.
Thanks so much for your read and kind words of support they are most appreciated
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