Nudism: A Senryū

Fränz Müller

Why not be naked?

Feel the cool breeze on your skin.

Experience joy!

 

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  • Kevin Hulme

    Yes. But Security in my Local Supermarket take a dim View of such things. I mean they don't have to be so rough.
    A good Write.

    • Fränz Müller

      If only they would open their minds! 😁. Thank you!

      • Kevin Hulme

        My Pleasure.

      • sorenbarrett

        One might take this as only physical but I bet that it is meant metaphorically to be naked in all respects, mentally, emotionally, physically or in other words take off one's mask and be oneself. A lovely write.

        • Fränz Müller

          Thank you! We should labor to free ourselves from those shackles we willingly put on, whatever they might be.

          • sorenbarrett

            You are most welcome and agreed

          • Demar Desu

            I agree; great poem

          • Tristan Robert Lange

            Fränz, you got me with this one. There’s such a playful freedom packed into just a few lines. It made me smile and reminded me how simple joy can be when we stop overthinking it. Wonderful write, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦‍⬛



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