monumental collapse

Tristan Robert Lange


Notice of absence from Tristan Robert Lange
Life is full of seasons. This is a season of transition for me, where I will be moving with my family to a new location. As such, with much logistics to consider, I am doing my best to keep up. Please know if I accidentally don't respond, it is not because I am ghosting or becoming distant. Once things settle after the move, I am sure life will return to some normalcy. In the meantime, and always:

Read πŸ‘“, Write ✍️, Rise πŸŒ…, Realize 🀯.

Tristan πŸŒΉπŸ–€πŸ™πŸ•―οΈπŸ¦β€β¬›
stones 
worn down
limestone
secure swill
leading—at will—
to more
 
stones
protruding,
jutting skyward,
heaven bound
sounds of hell’s
howling hounds
 
all temples
come toppling
 
down.
 
© 2026 Tristan Robert Lange. All rights reserved. 
First published on tristanrobertlange.com, August 4, 2026.
 
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  • nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson)

    so aptly put my friend, much enjoyed

    • Tristan Robert Lange

      Thanks, Norman! Really glad this one delivered for you. Your continued presence and support mean a lot, my friend! πŸ›οΈπŸΊπŸ”₯πŸ™

      • nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson)

        always welcome, much enjoyed

      • orchidee

        Now a hymn has the lines:
        'What with care and toil he (mankind) buildeth / Tower and temple fall to dust'.
        That started me singing it, but everyone else wished i hadn't sung (screeched). lol.

        • Tristan Robert Lange

          Hahaha! πŸ˜‚ Now I’m imagining everyone fleeing for safety while Orchi carries bravely on, completely undeterred by the evacuation. And, somewhere, I hear a glugger singing on...and we knows who! Ah-gah-gah-gah-glug-glug! πŸ›οΈπŸΊπŸ”₯πŸ™

        • sorenbarrett

          "all temples
          come toppling

          down."
          What a powerful statement of truth and applies to more that the physical temples but the inner ones as well. As a child I wondered why they called it limestone I tasted it and it had no lime taste to me.

          • Tristan Robert Lange

            Exactly, Soren! The physical is only part of what’s collapsing here...the monuments we construct within ourselves fall too. But now the important question has been settled: limestone contains a deeply disappointing amount of lime flavor. πŸ˜‚ False advertising I tell you! And I was about to ask for someone to pass the guac! Thanks, my friend! πŸ›οΈπŸΊπŸ”₯πŸ™

            • sorenbarrett

              My pleasure my friend

            • Paul Bell

              Every temple like every effigy has its day.
              Strange thing power, it stays with you till a more powerful force comes along and takes it away.

              • Tristan Robert Lange

                Exactly, Paul! Power has a funny way of convincing itself it’s permanent...right up until it isn’t. History certainly has plenty of rubble to prove the point. Much appreciated, my friend! πŸ›οΈπŸΊπŸ”₯πŸ™

              • arqios

                That days most assuredly always arrivesπŸ•ŠοΈπŸ™πŸ»

                • Tristan Robert Lange

                  Absolutely, my friend! Nothing stands forever...that day always finds its way around. Thanks for reading and engaging, Rik! Much appreciated! πŸ›οΈπŸΊπŸ”₯πŸ™

                • Friendship

                  Well written. Your poem reflects on the inevitability of decay and destruction, highlighting the fragility of human constructs and beliefs. The imagery you painted of stones worn down and temples toppling suggests a commentary on the transient nature of existence and the eventual downfall of even the most secure foundations.

                  • Tristan Robert Lange

                    Thank you so much, Friendship! Yes, indeed...that impermanence is very much where this one lives. Nothing we construct gets a guarantee of forever. Much appreciated, my friend! πŸ›οΈπŸΊπŸ”₯πŸ™

                  • Teddy.15

                    Very dark and mysterious indeed, a metaphor worth reflecting on. Tristan you my friend are a rockstar! 🌹

                    • Tristan Robert Lange

                      Hahaha, thank you, Teddy! Rockstar I’ll gladly take! *Enters air guitar solo here* πŸ€˜πŸ˜‚ Really appreciate you! You rock, too, my friend! πŸ›οΈπŸΊπŸ”₯πŸ™

                    • Lorenz

                      The hardest part of hell is the path that leads there ...

                      • Tristan Robert Lange

                        Indeed, Lorenz! That totally tracks. Thanks for reading, my friend! Much appreciated. πŸ›οΈπŸΊπŸ”₯πŸ™

                      • Neville


                        Nothing lasts forever does it .. thankfully .. tho' darkness seems to have more than it's fair share of it .. πŸ΄πŸ§πŸ΄πŸ¦β€β¬›πŸˆβ€β¬›πŸ–€

                        • Tristan Robert Lange

                          Absolutely, Neville! Thankfully, indeed...though darkness does seem to have negotiated one hell of a long-term lease. πŸ˜‚ Much appreciated, my friend! πŸ›οΈπŸΊπŸ”₯πŸ™



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